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Yolanthe van Kasbergen | B18
Yolanthe van Kasbergen | B18
Photography \ Figure | 01/17/06 @985 | 
daniel | 
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A friend who wanted a portfolio. She made it into dutch TV-soaps in 2005.equip. Nikon F85, 28-80mm, UV filter.
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 UE-Skateman01/01/70 @877 |
Concept:Average |
Technical Skill:Weak |
Impact/impression:Average |
Pros:
Cons:the shirt she's wearing is not helping the composition, the sparactic holes in it -aren't very complementative to the overall look of her and the mood you're trying to convey
Overall opinion/feedback:I like the direction you were headin with this, the excecution couldve been better though
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01/17/06 @993
nice try to start off with
- beautiful model
- The expression on her face is great, very "real" pose, a modern style pose
The problems for this photo are:- the shirt she's wearing is not helping the composition, the sparactic holes in it aren't very complementative to the overall look of her and the mood you're trying to convey
- The crack in the wall behind her is very distracting
- The overexposure on the shirt is hurting the shot as well
- her shadow is also a little distracting, but that is just because of the hard lighting from the left, but lighting can completely change the mood of a piece and it is often overlooked and forgotten, so keep that in mind
Promising first post but there is work to be done, congrats, keep it up01/18/06 @139
Carlos
01/18/06 @325
All is said. Keep it up
01/18/06 @390
as said: all has been said
keep experimenting!
01/18/06 @448
keep it up
01/18/06 @607
have nothig to crit all was said
keep it up